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Lord I just died in Your Arms tonight. Life You gave me so I give You my soul. I used to torture my soul with sin and establishing holes on each side and helpless I felt. Society look in my eyes; but You Lord looking at my main eye. Forgive me for my sins; because tonight I just died in Your Glorious Arms. I feel at peace understanding that Your Holy Word is No myth. Your Holy Word Is Holy help guide the lost and heal the sick and Your Holy Word change me from rotten to fresh. Souls dying inside the arms of Satan than slavery is there prominence. Lord; dying in Your Arms become perfection away from cracks on this earth surface. I died in Your Arms tonight. No more pain once I die away from this horrible life. The sky split; no sun I only witness Your Glorious Son. I just died in Your Arms tonight God. Thank You Jesus for dying for my life. Amen.